Wednesday, February 16, 2011
Essay 2
I really strugged with writing the first essay and now that we have to add 2 more pages to our essay i think it will be harder but hopefully i get more i deas or if yall have any ideas they will help. I wrote about how technology is detrimental everyone has their own opinion and I could have went either way but I chose detrimental cause their is also negative things to technology. But i wrote about their is less social interection, no excercise, and you dont get good education cause it destracts us from doing our work. But iam ganna reaserch more infromation and hopefully I find more ideas on this topic and if yall could any help would work.
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you could add how it changes social and cultural views.
i think it is a good idea to extend your essays i am doing the same thing.
Hey if it makes it easier, add really long quotes from the sources.
One thing that's going to make the essay longer automatically is exploring the arguments of the opposition. You can pretty much have an entire paragraph or two for each argument, and how and why it's not valid. This is all in addition to what you already have. Good luck!
I think you are on the right track, but provide examples for both sides of the arguement since now you can throw in opposing views. If anything it should help extend your essay. It should also help your arguement.
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