Ideas

My idea for the second essay is to either write a totally different paper on how cell phones are detrimental to society or to keep the paper i wrote about cellphones being benificial because i believe that cell phones are very benificial even though there is some detrimental things and just add research into it.

Essay 2 ideas

I'm chosing to write about the advancements in electricty technologies. It has a very positive outcome for society and a negative one for electric company workers. I haven't found any sources yet on this subject but this issue has been in the local papers recently.

Essay 2

I'm writing my essay over how telecommunicational technology is detrimental to humanity. I've found a few articles relating to health issues caused by prolong use of cell phones. I'm also writing about how lazy society has gotten because of cell phones and tvs. I'm incorporating "Trucks" into my essay with the idea behind the trucks getting too advanced and fighting back against society causing society to become their slaves like how we're becoming slaves to phones and tvs.

Essay 2

I am not really sure what position I would like to take for this essay. There are several reasons that could be elaborated on for both sides of the issue of whether technology is deterimental or benificial. I have currently been on the more positive side of the issue. I know that adding reasearch to this topic will aid in helping to choose a side. Technology could present it self a real problem in the near future if that is all that there is to rely on. The saying dont put all your eggs in one basket didnt just fall out of the sky. Someone had to have experienced putting their all into an area that ultimatley failed them.On the other hand technology has done wondeful things to enhance our society.

Essay 2

On my second essay I am definitely going to add an example from the short story I just finished reading that is entitled "Jaunt". Even though this story ended in a ver sad way there were a lot of things that society benefitted from the teleportation device.
I think the main reasons technology is detrimental to society have to do with pollution, as well as other health risks so I will find an argument to oppose these points. I recall some one also saying that new technology has made people lazy and has contributed to a nation-wide weight problem. Although I am leaning more toward technology being beneficial to society I am going to out examples from Stephen Kings stories on why technology is detrimental. "Trucks", Cell, "Night Surf", and "The Mangler give perfect examples on how technology can be detrimental.
All of these things will be added to my first essay. Some of these things will ofer me a chance to further demonstrate how technology is beneficial to society.

Essay 2

For essay 2, I am planning on expanding my thoughts on how transportation is beneficial to America. I would like to further detail on the history of transportation and its benefits for the every day person. I may even focus my topic on a more narrow subject, but I have not decided yet. If I do, I would probably write about airplanes. I am excited to be incorporating research into my essay and hope it turns out good!

Essay 2

For my second essay, I will expand my research and ideas from the first. I want to incorporate more examples from the King short stories into my paper, and I may want to add more examples from my own life as well. It will be much easier for me to just add more research and examples to the first essay rather than starting another paper all over again from scratch. I have to try to focus on making sure it all flows and makes sense to my readers. I also have to make sure that I don't write over the length limit too much, because then it may seem like I'm rambling. I'm looking forward to writing about the opposing views in this essay also, because I feel that there are a lot of negative effects of technology as well. I want to elaborate more on why technology is beneficial overall because of what it has done in the health care field, and I want to add examples from the short stories to prove this. I am pretty confident about this essay.

Essay 2

My ideas for our Essay number, I want to base more on Emergency Management and technology we use in and emergency and disaster more on commuications. I have mentioned it a lot in my first essay but I want to clarify it more and a better understanding and expand for others to read and get what we really to for our county .

Essay 2 Ideas

In my next essay, I'm going elaborate more on my first essay and elaborate more on my ideas I discussed in the first. I am going to show how being without technology can harm us and why it is so beneficial towards us more than detremental although it can be harmful to our society. I want to elaborate more on medicine and tests that doctors can run now, and how technology is saving more lives. I am also going to go back on some Stephen King stories I have read and put more examples into my essay from those. I'm hoping to learn a little bit more once I research a lot of this technology.

Essay 2 ideas

Tuesday, September 28, 2010

Extensive ideas on technology for essay 2

In my next essay about technology I'm going to go more into detail about an important piece of equipment used in medical technology that is called life support. Life support is a machine that is used to keep people alive and breathing for them.If that person gets to the point where they need life support without it there not able to breath on there own. Most people that need to be on life support dont recover from it the doctor will give his medical advice and the relative will have to make the decision to keep them on life support or take them off which will mean the passing of there loved one.Life support is very costly and can be extremely stressful for the family of the patient that is on life support.It is stressful in many ways for the simple fact the family doesnt know what the outcome will be on there loved one.Life support is extremely important part of medical technology and without it could be crucial. There are patients that come off of life support and recover but without life support it could be real crucial for patients decreasing chances for survival.In this next essay I just want to talk about the facts and research more about life support and how it has increased our survival rate but how costly it can be and if the patient has any problems from surviving from it. I want too research benefits and detriments of life support and include the info in my essay. I just basically want too talk about all around how medical technology has came along way and life support is a prime example of it.

Essay 2

I think that for my essay two, I am going to keep my first essay and just expand on it. I like the points I had in my first essay, and I think that adding some research would help enhance my essay and strengthen my viewpoints. I had a single personal experience in my first essay, so I will expand on that experience. I will also add statistics to back up my points and capture the reader’s attention. I have found many good examples of technology detriments in Stephen King’s short stories, both the ones we have been reading and the one’s I have read on my own. I am only going to have three main points in my new essay. I think I will use; how dependent we are, the physical dangers of technology, and the problem of identity theft. All three of these points will relate back to my overall topic of how technology is detrimental to our society. I am sure that I want to use cell phones in the first point, because almost everyone has a cell phone now. As we were talking about in class, I will also mention transportation as a detriment to society. I think for my second point I may use some type of technology from an everyday business that can cause injury, but is unheard of. If I cannot find anything, construction jobs are always dangerous. For my third topic, I will use something like online banking, since so many people use that. Those are basically my ideas for essay two.

#2

For the second essay I plan on starting from scratch. I noticed I wasn't really focused in the first essay so hopefully that's something I can fix. Like most people I'll be using the same thesis; mine is pro technology. I would highly recommend this since everything is technology. Without tech we wouldn't even have a bow and arrows; or even cloths. So, duh technology is a good thing. So I think most of my essay is going to be supporting that statement and pointing out we would be utterly lost without any technology.I'm still not sure what my main topics are going to be so if you have any suggestions, by all means let me know. This time around I'm mainly just going to be focusing on staying focused if that makes any sense.

Chelsea's Post.

As I'm seeing everyone's post on here, you see a positive side of technology. How we don't even need to be in class to talk to each other, to explain our feelings and more. It's pretty amazing if you ask me. That is why this time I am going to try and write a new essay, over the positivity of technology advancements. It's going to be challenging, since the past two weeks I have been looking at the negative side, but I like a challenge. I want to show the views of cell phones, Internet, and eBooks. I want to include a brief history over the cell phone evolution, how the Internet came to be, and how the newest eBooks work and what is the best brand to buy. I really want to include the eBooks, just because they are changing the ways of reading, the literature competion, and publishing. If anyone knows good websites and sources on the database, keep me updated!

Essay 2 Ideas

Im am going to expand my essay by talking about how the military can be a part of the negitive effects of technology. This time around I am going to use examples from Stephen King's books. This paper will be different, I am going to try to find even more ideas to add to my paper and I feel I wont talk too much more about what I already covered. Also if I do I will back it up with differnt examples. I already noticed that stephen king does say alot about technology being negative somtimes I just need to find a way to use it and be effective in the paper.

Jin's Essay Dos

I plan to write my second essay based on my thesis from my first essay; that society benefits from the use of technology. In my first essay I talk about2 things that helped shape the society we now live in. Therefore I am going to elaborate more on one of them which is the medical technology. I plan to talk more about the machines that save lives, why we need it, how is it beneficial, and how can we make it better. Also I want to add some history of how the medical technology in the beginning of modern medical care. I will also compare the differences between the start till present day. Now that I talked about the past, I will also explain couple concepts of what might happen in the future with medical technology as well. I've read about 2 examples where the King stated something about medical so I might implement some of that in my new essay as well.

Essay 2

I am going to stick with the fact that I feel that technology is and has been beneficial to humanity. I am not so sure that I am going to expand upon my original essay. I am not sure I can find examples from King to support my idea. I look forward to doing more research about technology and how Stephen King relates to technology in his stories. The advances made in technology over the years has changed the way almost everything is done.

Essay 2

I am going to keep my first essay and add to what I've come up with. I think that people will find it useful, thinking how technology effects the planet is something we forget about. I know that is one topic that hasn't been well thought out as we do all the technology up grades. I would like to go into more detail about the landfills, ozone layer and food supply. I think we get busy thinking of all the convenience things, and we forget to look at longevity effects. I am very surprise that no in my class has mention this side of technology. Reading over the other posting I just feel like we are being selfish and wanting more, but when is it playing god? That's one of the question I even have trouble answering when it comes to technology. I look forward to add more to my essay and maybe enlightening anyone who reads my essay.

Essay 2 Ideas

I'll stick with writing about the advantages of technology. More specifically, I will focus on technology in the workplace and for the jobseeker, employee, and employer. I feel that this is the area in which I have the most understanding, and because of that I think I have a better shot at my paper being thorough and easy for readers in general to follow.

essay 2

I think that I have some great point in my first essay so I will keep expanding on them. I think technology is benefical to humanity because of the creation of the internet. It makes things so much easier sometimes. That is if you are able to navigate properly. The three topics that I chose are e-mail, research and shopping. As a matter of a fact, I will actually be using the internet to research these topics. I'm sure that I will be able to find enough information to get my points across.

Essay 2 Ideas

For my second essay, I was thinking on expanding my first essay.  I'm more than positive that I'll find some statistical bits about how many casualties have been prevented on the front line or something like that.  Then again, I did have second guesses about it because I could pop something out about transportation, communication, or medical technology.  But I think that if I started on one subject, I can't just all of a sudden go back to square one and blindly start over.  Back in high school, it always used to be that way, but now that I have a solid basis to go by, it should not take that long or be that hard to do a proper essay.  Aside from that, the new research method will make the research aspect of the essay much easier than what I was used to.  In my essay, I'll stick to my original assertions, adding further data and possibly another assertion or two, and end it on a not so tragic note.  Now, the one thing that I'm somewhat concerned about is adding irrelevant or excessive data.  I mean, there's quite a bit of information around for my essay subject, but it might be hard to hold back to three or four pages.

essay two ideas

I want to base essay two off of my recent paper on technology and just add insight from kings experiences and information that I obatin from my research on technology and its benifits to humanity. I also want to incorporate my own personal expericences into this paper and give as much detail as possible. I plan to state my position on the oppsoing view as strongly as possible and maybe even persuade the reader to agree with me on why i believe that technology is benefical to humanity.i want to expand my essay in a positive way and be able to express myself without adding any unescessary information or ramble on about things just to add length to my paper. i also pretty excite about using the whole new research tutorial guide which i think is going to make life much easier for me. with that being said i think im on the right path to a excellent research paper.

Essay #2 Ideas

Although I enjoyed talking about gene manipulation in my first essay, I think I may go a differnet direction with my second. Military tech seems like it may be a good subject. It would be an easy subject to write on, I have first hand experience on how it can save and take lives. I would choose to write about how it has greatly benefited humanity. I have a feeling that I'll probably be the only one to write a pro military tech paper. Seems most people are opossed to it, I should get some interesting feedback. The other idea I have been kicking around is americas dependence on fossil fuel technology. The recent oil problems have made an abundance of sources for information. When I lived in Georgia, there was no gasiline delivered to the city for 3 days. Gas prices hit 6 dollars a gallon at some places and the prices did not drop for weeks afterwards. The third option for me was to write about the addictive nature and entertainment value of them. I have seen and read alot of stories that talk about both and it seems that it is a real issue. At this point I do not really know which I will pick.