Wednesday, September 29, 2010
#2
For the second essay I plan on starting from scratch. I noticed I wasn't really focused in the first essay so hopefully that's something I can fix. Like most people I'll be using the same thesis; mine is pro technology. I would highly recommend this since everything is technology. Without tech we wouldn't even have a bow and arrows; or even cloths. So, duh technology is a good thing. So I think most of my essay is going to be supporting that statement and pointing out we would be utterly lost without any technology.I'm still not sure what my main topics are going to be so if you have any suggestions, by all means let me know. This time around I'm mainly just going to be focusing on staying focused if that makes any sense.
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I'm sure you'll do well, and i hope i do also. I understand what you mean about being mor focused this time. Last time I wrote about things and how it was beneficial and wasn't as focused, and would have been a better way to write it. So good thing for second chances. Good Luck!
I understood exactly what you meant whenever you said that you really didn't focus on a main topic and that you're hoping to better focus on one subject. I am hoping to do the same thing because I didn't focus too much either on one topic. Hopefully we both do better this time around, good luck!
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