Essay 2 Ideas

For my second essay, I was thinking on expanding my first essay.  I'm more than positive that I'll find some statistical bits about how many casualties have been prevented on the front line or something like that.  Then again, I did have second guesses about it because I could pop something out about transportation, communication, or medical technology.  But I think that if I started on one subject, I can't just all of a sudden go back to square one and blindly start over.  Back in high school, it always used to be that way, but now that I have a solid basis to go by, it should not take that long or be that hard to do a proper essay.  Aside from that, the new research method will make the research aspect of the essay much easier than what I was used to.  In my essay, I'll stick to my original assertions, adding further data and possibly another assertion or two, and end it on a not so tragic note.  Now, the one thing that I'm somewhat concerned about is adding irrelevant or excessive data.  I mean, there's quite a bit of information around for my essay subject, but it might be hard to hold back to three or four pages.