Tuesday, September 28, 2010

Jin's Essay Dos

I plan to write my second essay based on my thesis from my first essay; that society benefits from the use of technology. In my first essay I talk about2 things that helped shape the society we now live in. Therefore I am going to elaborate more on one of them which is the medical technology. I plan to talk more about the machines that save lives, why we need it, how is it beneficial, and how can we make it better. Also I want to add some history of how the medical technology in the beginning of modern medical care. I will also compare the differences between the start till present day. Now that I talked about the past, I will also explain couple concepts of what might happen in the future with medical technology as well. I've read about 2 examples where the King stated something about medical so I might implement some of that in my new essay as well.

5 comments:

3nr!qu3 said...

I'm pretty sure I'll enjoy reading your paper. I'm planning on going into medicine, so I'll be excited to read about the machines that might put me out of a job. That last part, of course, was a joke.

Daniel Vaughn said...

Good topic, medical tech. is going to have alot of sources. Not to mention its true, medical technology saves countless lives everyday.

kthompson said...

i totally agree with you im also plan to use essay 2 as astructure piece for essay 3 my only problem is that i dont know how to go about researching have any ideas?

Twila said...

You have a really good topic. So many people use medical technology everyday or they wouldn't be living. I also like how you are going to show past, present, and future.

J1N F7NG said...

We are all humans and to survive we need health. We all can get sick at some piont. Right?

@Thompson: You mean to incoporate essay 1 to essay 2 right? You can start by using EBSCO because it is most effecient and reliable.