Wednesday, September 29, 2010
Essay 2
For my second essay, I will expand my research and ideas from the first. I want to incorporate more examples from the King short stories into my paper, and I may want to add more examples from my own life as well. It will be much easier for me to just add more research and examples to the first essay rather than starting another paper all over again from scratch. I have to try to focus on making sure it all flows and makes sense to my readers. I also have to make sure that I don't write over the length limit too much, because then it may seem like I'm rambling. I'm looking forward to writing about the opposing views in this essay also, because I feel that there are a lot of negative effects of technology as well. I want to elaborate more on why technology is beneficial overall because of what it has done in the health care field, and I want to add examples from the short stories to prove this. I am pretty confident about this essay.
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2 comments:
I agree with you about building on your previous essay. Your thoughts are organized and your post is well-written. I'm interested to read the final product!
I am also planning on building from my original essay. I believe it will serve as an outline and I will expand all my ideas. I think you're essay will be great and look forward to reading it!
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