Jin's Essay Dos

I plan to write my second essay based on my thesis from my first essay; that society benefits from the use of technology. In my first essay I talk about2 things that helped shape the society we now live in. Therefore I am going to elaborate more on one of them which is the medical technology. I plan to talk more about the machines that save lives, why we need it, how is it beneficial, and how can we make it better. Also I want to add some history of how the medical technology in the beginning of modern medical care. I will also compare the differences between the start till present day. Now that I talked about the past, I will also explain couple concepts of what might happen in the future with medical technology as well. I've read about 2 examples where the King stated something about medical so I might implement some of that in my new essay as well.